1) Title: Put CDF in the title
It is in the abstract and the title is long already.

2) page 3: after Kaluz-Klein put (KK)

done

3) page 3: an n-torus -> a n-torus

done

4) page 3: The Higgs naturalness problem; explain?

it would take more than a sentence so we leave as is

5) page 4: describe straight the experimental signature

done

6) page 4: define K factor

done

7) page 4: paragraph after "estimated signal cross section"

done

8) page 4: paragraph after "the nominal interaction region"

done

8) page 4: clearer distiction between physics bgrs and noise

done